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Post by Deleted on Sept 24, 2011 11:35:13 GMT
...By An Invisible Sun
[soundcloud]http://soundcloud.com/tomb1985/our-life-is-a-pure-flame-we[/soundcloud]
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Post by jollyboy on Sept 24, 2011 11:37:27 GMT
Hope this was inspired by your recent relationship woes mate  |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 24, 2011 11:40:16 GMT
Fucking lovely mate. Hope this is the start of a new EP/album and the legendary Mr Xang is included.
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Post by jp on Sept 24, 2011 11:43:24 GMT
its no hello monday, but i really like your voice tuckertom.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 24, 2011 11:45:34 GMT
I think it could do with some more lyrics, it feels like a second part is coming but never comes.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 26, 2011 8:33:00 GMT
Dan:  , but, I wrote the lyrics on my phone on the way to work. 'Our life is a pure flame and we live by an invisble sun' is actually a quote from somewhere. Makes no sense to me but it sounds coool. Karl: It had a third verse but it was a bit shit so I scrapped it and just did some picking over the top of the chords to close. I need to work on writing longer tunes tbh. As for EP/album plans, I'm working on something. And yes, 'Mr Xang' will be included. JP: 'Hello, Monday' is still my favourite out of the tunes I've done. Either that or the Xmas song  |
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Post by monkeytennis on Sept 26, 2011 10:39:44 GMT
your voice is fucking outstanding mate and i love your phrasing, however poncey that sounds as others have said, it does feel a bit unfinished, but has absolutely loads of potential. well done tom, keep it going |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 26, 2011 10:57:06 GMT
Yeah, I suppose at this stage it's a rough as fuck demo. The mic I use picks up a ton of hiss but I've found something in Adobe Audition that reduces that. I'll definitely be re-recording this with another verse and more of an intro. Thanks for the feedback, Baz |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 26, 2011 13:38:16 GMT
How do you reduce the hiss? Never seen that feature.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 26, 2011 13:53:32 GMT
Click on the track then got to Effects (I think it's Effects)
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Post by barny on Sept 26, 2011 16:11:01 GMT
What about turning the volume up?
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Post by Deleted on Sept 26, 2011 17:10:53 GMT
Already sorted that out, Barn. Will change the Sound Cloud thingy when I finish work. |
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Post by babu on Sept 26, 2011 19:02:10 GMT
i can do a bit of mastering on your tunes if you'd like, xxx
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Post by thegreathehe on Sept 26, 2011 19:23:19 GMT
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Post by Deleted on Sept 26, 2011 19:24:26 GMT
That would be cool, Babs. Would you need the guitar and vocal tracks separately?
I've replaced the original Soundcloud with the new one (hiss reduced, volume increased)
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Post by babu on Sept 26, 2011 19:30:37 GMT
yeah and in .wav/.aiff too.
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Post by babu on Sept 26, 2011 19:31:49 GMT
without the hiss reduction if that's possible
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, but, I wrote the lyrics on my phone on the way to work. 'Our life is a pure flame and we live by an invisble sun' is actually a quote from somewhere. Makes no sense to me but it sounds coool.
